About "Rematch"

This story was the  pits to write.   So why did I write it?  It started out as an exercise on moving people around on the page seamlessly  etc.. and just grew.  After a week or two I had a lot of time invested in it so I decided to carry it through to a conclusion.  As you can tell, its my least favorite story, but I'm glad I wrote it.  I learned a lot about movement and a bit about transitions.    Was there a Pat or a Kurt?  Yes, but I met them while selling in another industry yet to be included in any of my stories.